tasting the salt in the air,
watching the mist that brings it near,
feeling sun’s warmth enshrine my skin,
listening to sea gulls, begging again,
the smell of hot dogs grilling afar,
in the moment, who cares where we are,
the senses combine, creating the scene,
as hearts cherish the moments,
feeling serene.
It’s cold n rainy out so where better to go than the beach thanks for reading.
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Moe Radosevich
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Comments (7)
Always love the beach! Awesome poem!
This is an sensational imagery, Like I was actually there 🥰
You brought me there in my mind ❤️
Lovely! Thank you for the mental trip!
Oh my, you've beautifully described one. of my favorite places. Wonderful work!
Big beach lover here, love that poem
Nice ❤️