Mindfield
Haiku string
They wish they were blind
Unable to look away
Forced to watch it all-
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Plug and play again
Relentless sordid cycle
He sees, crushed Witness-
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Shepherd knows the worst
Sees lamb in unholy clutch
Mirrors pressing in-
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The World pulls him close
Spirits collide in battle
As Father looks on-
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Angel reaches out
For his soul, but he is lost
In lurid powers-
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In this spirit realm
The battle is fierce, but the
Reward is his soul-
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Dark clashes with Light
Fangs bared, claws ripping at wings,
Silky feathers fall-
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Host of angels join
And He leaves the ninety nine
To bring this one Home-
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-
When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (12)
Great job here, congratulations Colleen!
This is fabulous. Congrats on the TS.
Congrats on Top Story!!
Congrats on Top Story!
Beautiful and powerful! Congratulations on receiving Top Story!
Back to say congrats on your well deserved Top Story!😊
congratulations on TS. this is amazing.
Congratulations on your top story
This is very intense !
Wow this is intense and very good.
Love it! Excellent work, as always!🥰
Exceptionally done. Nature is a fierce contender.