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Mindfield

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By Colleen WaltersPublished 14 days ago Updated 14 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
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Mindfield
Photo by James Lewis on Unsplash

They wish they were blind

Unable to look away

Forced to watch it all-

Plug and play again

Relentless sordid cycle

He sees, crushed Witness-

Shepherd knows the worst

Sees lamb in unholy clutch

Mirrors pressing in-

The World pulls him close

Spirits collide in battle

As Father looks on-

Angel reaches out

For his soul, but he is lost

In lurid powers-

In this spirit realm

The battle is fierce, but the

Reward is his soul-

Dark clashes with Light

Fangs bared, claws ripping at wings,

Silky feathers fall-

Host of angels join

And He leaves the ninety nine

To bring this one Home-

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About the Creator

Colleen Walters

i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-

When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.

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  • Gloria Penelope11 days ago

    Great job here, congratulations Colleen!

  • Cathy holmes13 days ago

    This is fabulous. Congrats on the TS.

  • Belle13 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!!

  • angela hepworth13 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Mack D. Ames13 days ago

    Beautiful and powerful! Congratulations on receiving Top Story!

  • Anna 13 days ago

    Back to say congrats on your well deserved Top Story!😊

  • Margaret Brennan13 days ago

    congratulations on TS. this is amazing.

  • Congratulations on your top story

  • This is very intense !

  • Rowan Finley 14 days ago

    Wow this is intense and very good.

  • Anna 14 days ago

    Love it! Excellent work, as always!🥰

  • ROCK 14 days ago

    Exceptionally done. Nature is a fierce contender.

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