Mid-Breath, Mid-Fall
A Poem in the Pause Between Faith and Frenzy
not exactly,
I say
all the stars are out tonight,
this August night
~
with all the enthusiasm
of an overly fraught—
we wait with baited breath
for the awe-inspiring
~
nightwatchmen
but, my faith is strong
as Perseus, the hero of old,
sends forth arrows
~
and my love
is weakness in the blush,
touched by starlight,
filled with love, honour,
~
and the frenzy
not, out, out, brief candle
in great Ethiopia,
there was a Queen Cassiopeia
~
I say
with all
who ruled her nation
aside her husband Cepheus
~
of a
night watch
and to them
Andromeda was born, their daughter
~
but,
and, in the blush—
beauty was bestowed upon her
with also hubris
~
the frenzy
sex is a tepid form of
retribution
for—
~
Cassiopeia, full of vanity,
did call attention
to her beauty, beauty
that rivalled the sea nymphs
~
the back-to-basics
approach to trust
in her own mind
and angered the great Poseidon
~
but if faith
is the frenzy—
Cetus, legendary beast,
was sent to ravage Ethiopia
~
inhale, exhale
draw the breath—
a compromise was made:
Andromeda was offered as ransom
~
the role
of
the
falling
~
a fair maiden for the nation,
oh, who could save her?
as Perseus first set his eyes
upon the maiden damsel
~
a promise was made,
a pact that set Perseus
on a quest—
~
earth falls
he sought the head
of the great mortal Gorgon, Medusa,
with hair of snakes
~
powers beyond the world he knew,
his wits and wily spirit—
he needed, bravery unbound
~
my breath haunts me,
flowing forward,
from my mouth opened
in agaze—
~
agape drains me
as the coarsest takes his stand.
~
the head he sought,
he did claim
to battle mighty Cetus—
~
the coarsest a foe or no,
hero,
or the t-shirt
in your drawer.
~
with arrows and swords,
gleaming, shining metallic—
and now I am left thinking
~
of everything that
accounts for
banalismistics.
~
he hid and ducked,
slid and ran
and launched attack,
~
brave and true,
he knew what to do,
with blade in hand—
~
he took a swipe
across the neck
of the great Medusa.
~
so, with the dripping,
serpent-crowned terror’s head,
Perseus ventured
across the vast oceans
~
to honour his vow,
not once giving thought
to whether he lived or died—
~
to fight the mighty Cetus
and win the hand of Andromeda,
to win the praise
and derision of the gods themselves
~
Do I ever feel so heroic
and win the praise and derision
of the gods themselves
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: I had two warring, but connected poems. One was the bones of a very fragmented take on the Somewhere Between Here and There Challenge. The other was for Mike Singleton's August challenge (Which I missed! Sorry, Mike), inspired by the Perseid Meteor Shower and connected t0 Ancient Greek stories of Perseus.
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