"Darling” is the word that usually came out of his mouth
Intense and sweet it made me feel.
Sure enough I’d smile when he said it
Time and time again I fell for it
Rolling deep in the love he gave
A bouquet of flowers he produced from thin air like a magician
Could make me my anger melt in forgiveness.
Too in love I couldn’t see
In plain view what was to come.
On my pillow I lay my head in my prison cell
Now the flowers go to another girl, and the merchandise probably hidden below her kitchen sink.
About the Creator
Gal Mux
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So learn everything you can.
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Comments (4)
Whoaaa, I was not expecting that! But it would have been so worth it! Loved your poem!
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Unsuspecting turn. Well done!
Very heartfelt. Wonderful writing.