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A poem

By Gal MuxPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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"Darling” is the word that usually came out of his mouth

Intense and sweet it made me feel.

Sure enough I’d smile when he said it

Time and time again I fell for it

Rolling deep in the love he gave

A bouquet of flowers he produced from thin air like a magician

Could make me my anger melt in forgiveness.

Too in love I couldn’t see

In plain view what was to come.

On my pillow I lay my head in my prison cell

Now the flowers go to another girl, and the merchandise probably hidden below her kitchen sink.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Gal Mux

Lover of all things reading & writing, 🥭 &

🍍salsas, 🍓 & vanilla ice cream, MJ & Beyoncé.

Nothing you learn is ever wasted - Berry Gordy

So learn everything you can.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 months ago

    Whoaaa, I was not expecting that! But it would have been so worth it! Loved your poem!

  • Dana Stewart4 months ago

    Unsuspecting turn. Well done!

  • Real Poetic4 months ago

    Very heartfelt. Wonderful writing.

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