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Magic Hour


By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Magic Hour
Photo by Johannes Plenio on Unsplash

When The Sun Melts behind the shorelines…

I become alive…

My Heart becomes Ample to take a diversified approach.

Maybe for love

Or maybe for more…

I confiscated a deep whiff of the light ambiance…

Below the perfect picture of the Magic Hours…

I aim my Phone and “Snap, snap,”

A picture that will last forever.

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Thavien Yliaster2 months ago

    Too bad that all of our photos don't always capture all of those emotions in that moment. Sometimes even when the emotions are memorized, at times when we feel emotionally distraught due to circumstances beyond our control, we might feel that those memorized emotions are betraying us then and there.

  • Colleen Millsteed 2 months ago

    This is so beautiful my friend. I love it 💕congratulations on top story.

  • Muhammad Naveed2 months ago

    beautiful! You may like this https://vocal.media/poets/sensual-sway

  • Beautiful, evocative images contrasting with the mendacity of reducing the sublime to a photograph. Not that photographs aren't great. I love them. But somehow they never seem to measure up to the gestalt of the present experience (unless you've got a really great eye, in which case the artist may manage to capture something even greater & more intimate--I don't have that eye). Just one question: the entire poem is written in the present tense with one exception--"confiscated". Was that your intention? I found it jarring, which may explain why my mind made the shift from the sublime to the mundane instead of staying with the sense of the sublime & the hope of preserving that sublime moment forever. I don't even know which I would prefer, though I have to admit I appreciate being jarred from my expectations & sent on a different path.

  • Touseef Ahmed2 months ago

    Wow heart touching!! By the way guys do give a read to my latest piece of work ! T.I.A LINK BELOW https://vocal.media/poets/reaching-for-the-stars-snsd0lck

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Such magical words, kind thoughtful Handsomelouii, stay who you are. Your heart shines through. Congrats, well deserved.

  • Awesome.

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Simply magical! Gorgeous work! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • Donna Fox2 months ago

    This was enchanting and beautiful!

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Beautiful♥️ Congratulations on Top story!

  • Tina D'Angelo2 months ago

    The magic hour- perfect! Congratulations!

  • A pictuer might be worth a thousand words. But your words here clearly outdo a picture! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Gorgeous! Congratulations on Top Story! ❤️

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  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    Fantastic! Congratulations on your top story too.

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    Beautiful! Congrats on top story!

  • Joshua Alejandro2 months ago

    Wow! I aspire to write like this, from the heart. Keep going! This is beautiful.

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    What a soothing moment. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story :)

  • Kelly Robertson2 months ago

    Absolutely beautiful from start to finish!

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    Stunning!! 😍😍😍

  • KJ Aartila2 months ago

    A spectacular image shared in your words. :)

  • Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Moe Radosevich2 months ago

    beautiful Lonzo, bravo 😀

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