When The Sun Melts behind the shorelines…
I become alive…
My Heart becomes Ample to take a diversified approach.
Maybe for love
Or maybe for more…
I confiscated a deep whiff of the light ambiance…
Below the perfect picture of the Magic Hours…
I aim my Phone and “Snap, snap,”
A picture that will last forever.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (33)
Too bad that all of our photos don't always capture all of those emotions in that moment. Sometimes even when the emotions are memorized, at times when we feel emotionally distraught due to circumstances beyond our control, we might feel that those memorized emotions are betraying us then and there.
This is so beautiful my friend. I love it 💕congratulations on top story.
beautiful! You may like this https://vocal.media/poets/sensual-sway
Beautiful, evocative images contrasting with the mendacity of reducing the sublime to a photograph. Not that photographs aren't great. I love them. But somehow they never seem to measure up to the gestalt of the present experience (unless you've got a really great eye, in which case the artist may manage to capture something even greater & more intimate--I don't have that eye). Just one question: the entire poem is written in the present tense with one exception--"confiscated". Was that your intention? I found it jarring, which may explain why my mind made the shift from the sublime to the mundane instead of staying with the sense of the sublime & the hope of preserving that sublime moment forever. I don't even know which I would prefer, though I have to admit I appreciate being jarred from my expectations & sent on a different path.
Wow heart touching!! By the way guys do give a read to my latest piece of work ! T.I.A LINK BELOW https://vocal.media/poets/reaching-for-the-stars-snsd0lck
So, beautifully penned !!! Thanks for sharing your words.
Such magical words, kind thoughtful Handsomelouii, stay who you are. Your heart shines through. Congrats, well deserved.
Awesome.
Simply magical! Gorgeous work! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
This was enchanting and beautiful!
Beautiful♥️ Congratulations on Top story!
The magic hour- perfect! Congratulations!
A pictuer might be worth a thousand words. But your words here clearly outdo a picture! Congratulations on Top Story!
Beautiful piece. Congrats on the Top Story.
Gorgeous! Congratulations on Top Story! ❤️
congratulations!
Fantastic! Congratulations on your top story too.
Beautiful! Congrats on top story!
Wow! I aspire to write like this, from the heart. Keep going! This is beautiful.
What a soothing moment. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story :)
Absolutely beautiful from start to finish!
Stunning!! 😍😍😍
A spectacular image shared in your words. :)
Congratulations on your Top Story
beautiful Lonzo, bravo 😀