love in a piece
what happened when the love has gone
the love has gone
gone into another place
broken down piece by piece
thats why we needed space
i thought our love was lethal
we were two different people
the pressure made it moronic
now it sounds veey ironic
never heard a goodbye
A broken promises I couldnt deny
but everyday I did try
to bulid up a much better tie
Every look of your picture reminds me of the love we had
now it is just an reminder of something stuck in the past
but you met someone else
someone who you now can call your own
then came your separation after
we became one again like a stone
About the Creator
Forest Green
Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (2)
This made me so emotional because it was very relatable! Awesome poem!
Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕