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love in a piece

what happened when the love has gone

By Forest GreenPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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love in a piece
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the love has gone

gone into another place

broken down piece by piece

thats why we needed space

i thought our love was lethal

we were two different people

the pressure made it moronic

now it sounds veey ironic

never heard a goodbye

A broken promises I couldnt deny

but everyday I did try

to bulid up a much better tie

Every look of your picture reminds me of the love we had

now it is just an reminder of something stuck in the past

but you met someone else

someone who you now can call your own

then came your separation after

we became one again like a stone

heartbreak
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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    This made me so emotional because it was very relatable! Awesome poem!

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

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