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Loss of the Mind

A short poem

By Raven DiamondPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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The smallest touch madness

numbness

Overloaded

Pleasure receptors corroded

Breath abandons

Moving in tandem

Moans crescendo

a snowy memento

Buzzing sounds

Time for another round

Backstory: This is my attempt at a more "spicy" erotic poem mostly because my friend said my other one was tame. I guess it's a point I have to prove now. I really want my writing craft to shine in all areas and that takes a lot of practice. I really hope that my practice isn't too far off from where it needs to be for published works, but if it is at least I'll have an active viewable record of growth.

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Raven Diamond

I am an actor, published author,sketchbook library artist, model, award nominated singer/songwriter, IT specialist, entrepreneur, wife and mother.

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