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Loss of the Mind

by Raven Diamond 9 days ago in surreal poetry

A short poem

The smallest touch madness

numbness

Overloaded

Pleasure receptors corroded

Breath abandons

Moving in tandem

Moans crescendo

a snowy memento

Buzzing sounds

Time for another round

Backstory: This is my attempt at a more "spicy" erotic poem mostly because my friend said my other one was tame. I guess it's a point I have to prove now. I really want my writing craft to shine in all areas and that takes a lot of practice. I really hope that my practice isn't too far off from where it needs to be for published works, but if it is at least I'll have an active viewable record of growth.

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