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Lollipop

Confectionary Colors on a Stick❗

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 7 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2023
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Lollipop
Photo by Ali Pazani on Unsplash

Lollipop 🍭

Radiant,

-Luminous

Bright,

And

-Sweet…

Lollipop-

Oh,

Lollipop-

My favorite

Treat…

During Snack time and after I Eat.

-Bring Lollipops 🍭

Bring them

For me…

By Nick Fewings on Unsplash

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Welcome to “My Public Diary “🤪💖

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward) (Author)6 months ago

    🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭

  • ThatWriterWoman7 months ago

    Another playful piece - Nice!

  • Denise E Lindquist7 months ago

    Congratulations on top story 🎉🎉🎉

  • Andrea Corwin 7 months ago

    I like it!! Trick or Treat…

  • Anthony Chan7 months ago

    Beautiful choice of words!

  • StoryholicFinds7 months ago

    Great story and congrats! ❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon 7 months ago

    Congrats on your TOP STORY lil broski!

  • Lollipops have always been okay, but never my favorite confection. I've always loved the song, however, & thoroughly enjoyed your little ode to it here.

  • Alexander McEvoy7 months ago

    Such a sweet poem! I prefer chocolate personally but never refuse a good ol’ lollipop!

  • Real Poetic7 months ago

    Lollipops are one of the best Halloween candy! 🍭 🩵🎊 Congrats!

  • Everyday Junglist7 months ago

    Neither by land, nor by sea, Will you find a poet more handsome, then handsomelouii When you say hello, he says goodbye. And he spells louis with a double i You may drive a Chevy, but for him it's always Ford. The handsomest of all poets, aka Lonzo Ward. LOL! Cograts again buddy. That's another $5 right in the old wallet. Goodbye neighborhood poetry slams 5 nights a week, hello retirement on private island! I've said if from day one and I will say it until my dying breath, of all the handsome poets through the course of history, none have been nor ever likely will be as handsome as handsomelouii, the handsomest of all the poets. Not even that snake in the grass handsomelarry. I really hate that guy.And the less said about handsomelisa the better. LOL Seriously, congrats again and awesome poem brother.

  • Rachel Deeming7 months ago

    Short and sweet! Congrats on TS!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby7 months ago

    I like lollis Lol great job here my friend on your top story 💕 🌈

  • Sweet sweet lollipoppy! I lovey your poemy about lollipoppy!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji7 months ago

    Trick or treat for a lollipop sweet

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Lol. That's cute.

  • Catherine Nyomenda7 months ago

    First man, I've heard who loves lollipops. LOL. Lovely poem.

  • J. S. Wade7 months ago

    Ooo. I’m a sucker for a sucker! Good one Lonzo! 🍭

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    Yes, this is a sweet one. Fun poem, Lonzo!

  • Kelsey Clarey7 months ago

    This was a fun poem! Definitely perfect for halloween month!

  • Margaret Brennan7 months ago

    tootsie pops were always my favorites

  • Phil Flannery7 months ago

    That was fun to read.

  • Darkos7 months ago

    Hahahaha ❤️❤️ I am buying lollipop today Sweet and Trick treat Thank You for sharing Your favorite snack in a lovely poem :) 😉

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