Little Humans
What’s wrong with you?
I don’t want to humiliate you
I am compassionate
I just want to help you
But you expected me to trample on you
I didn’t
Then you think I’m no human
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You love me so much
That’s obvious
I realize you love me
To begin with
I therefore give you my heart easily
Then you throw it away
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I seem to be pure and perfect
I make good with no doubts
I try to help you and you doubt
You think I’m no clever
Or too clever to be real
Then you reject my help
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Little humans want it harsh
Little humans love pains
Little humans are masochists
Little humans are Just insane
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They suffered from their own pleasure
Dumbed down by their own reasoning
And were jailed by their own freedom
As they chose to rest in a cave they built
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They were told that life is a jungle
They look for predators everywhere
When they don’t find them
They become it themselves
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Yes, though provoking this one. Rendered beautiful.
Just, wow! 💛 This poem is so poignant, thought-provoking, and beautifully written. Magnificent. 💓
Splendid!!! Loving it!!!