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Lisa

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By Antoinette L BreyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Lisa
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Dear Lisa,

lady of the city

Slight of hand.

I am sorry I did not see

that my moments of shock

were your normality

I did not grasp your true reality

You stood in your glory, and I said goodbye

I was horrified

I know not of your fate

Can't be worse then mine

Fresh tears, Sincerely

Ann

heartbreak
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About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  1. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Dear Fellow 'Elder' - I so relate and have "Fun" by following your lovely offerings. If you have a moment please see my "Dance" it may Pop-Out fond memories of your own? Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    beautifully said. Well done.

  • Cendrine Marrouatabout a year ago

    Sometimes, we only realize the impact people have on us a long time after their paths have deviated from ours. It's ok though, we are not perfect. ;-) A very emotional and relatable read.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Wonderful!!!💖💖💕

  • Great piece❤️😉

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Very thought provoking

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh wow, this was surprisingly emotional. I had to reread a few times. Great work!!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    This was an interesting and unexpected piece from you! Well done, Antoinette!

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