Dear Lisa,
lady of the city
Slight of hand.
I am sorry I did not see
that my moments of shock
were your normality
I did not grasp your true reality
You stood in your glory, and I said goodbye
I was horrified
I know not of your fate
Can't be worse then mine
Fresh tears, Sincerely
Ann
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (8)
Dear Fellow 'Elder' - I so relate and have "Fun" by following your lovely offerings. If you have a moment please see my "Dance" it may Pop-Out fond memories of your own? Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
beautifully said. Well done.
Sometimes, we only realize the impact people have on us a long time after their paths have deviated from ours. It's ok though, we are not perfect. ;-) A very emotional and relatable read.
Wonderful!!!💖💖💕
Great piece❤️😉
Very thought provoking
Oh wow, this was surprisingly emotional. I had to reread a few times. Great work!!
This was an interesting and unexpected piece from you! Well done, Antoinette!