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Limerick confused as a haiku

Haiku confused as a child as a son as a soldier (for children being assaulted in Gaza)

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Limerick confused as a haiku
Photo by Amber Kipp on Unsplash

The soldiers masked as

Men, took me to a strange pen

I was once a son.

—-

Can you make destruction look like something that shines?

I’m afraid to make you laugh because the bombs go off at random times

I’m a son, not a soldier

I feel like my heart will smolder

I write a haiku to give to mother, she said it sounded like a limerick and this was way too long and didn’t rhyme.

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There once was a soldier

Whose soul they did sold there

To a rainy, misty motherly face

A caught trout flailing in a fiery mace

And dropped the act, falling into despair

_

Once, there was a shoe

On two feet they did bounce, flew

Now it’s a burnt glue.

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Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

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The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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    Written by Melissa Ingoldsby