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Life Taken, Not Deceased

Limbo a sure as hell lost place

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Life Taken, Not Deceased

They unplugged me while I stood

breathing dust in a room that once knew me

a chair turned sideways, no one asked why

My shoes are still by the door

no one claimed them

they do not rot, they do not walk

I eat from shadows,

pressing my teeth on the shape of old spoons

half-remembered dinners,

nobody speaks of me now,

only to correct the spelling

I am not dead

they just stopped folding the clothes I wore

they stopped calling what I say a voice

Even my ghost is refused

sent back, marked wrong address

left upright in the rain

A child saw me once

pointed, then forgot

a bit of red string in her pocket

My name has edges

but no longer cuts

it floats in bins, typed out wrong

then deleted

Do you know how it feels

to exist without weight

to flicker when the fridge light hums

to be neither story nor silence

Not a passing

Not a staying

Life taken,

not deceased

Limbo is not life

not the fires of hell

It’s a warning

your neither up or down

in or out

Not quite yet alive,

however, no way am I dead

no one hears when I shout

left here hanging about.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk