Life’s Common Senses
Sensual Realism
the smell I love most,
to which I give a toast,
is that of frying bacon;
shall never walk in,
a busy kitchen,
and ask ya”what ya makin”,
and,
the sight I see,
so comforting to me,
is a mountain majesty,
reaching high, toward the sky,
that’s where I love to be,
and then,
a comforting touch,
can mean so much,
to those who need consoled,
a loss, a pain, seeking hope in vain,
to overcome fears untold;
plus,
a whisper of courage,
in a wavering ear,
so much needed to hear,
breeding strength within,
finding hope again,
overcoming a fear;
so,
to taste the merits,
of all the above,
each sense safely common,
with undaunted love;
the bacon, the mountain,
the fears untold,
touching each soul,
as lives unfold.
Thank you for reading, if this touched a soul, give a smile.
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (4)
I love how you tied every sense together at the end. "All lives unfold" indeed. Well crafted!
Whoaaa, this was so deep!
This was lovely, Moe! I really enjoyed your seamless flow of sense to the next :)
Covered it all well, buddy!