To entangle life into verse?
Some can't think of anything worse
Than writing down truths
And evident proofs:
Life's absurdity put in a hearse.
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Rachel Deeming
Mum, blogger, crafter, reviewer, writer, traveller: I love to write and I am not limited by form. Here, you will find stories, articles, opinion pieces, poems, all of which reflect me: who I am, what I love, what I feel, how I view things.
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When the Robots Took My Job
This is for RM Stockton's Write Club prompt for the month of April: AI Please allow me to vent. For "college," I went to a scam school that is now closed. We were promised internships that were never spoken of again after admissions, and we were promised help finding jobs. The first time I went to the career counselor's office, she was completely frazzled. She had no idea what to do with us, the film majors. The second time I visited her office, I let her know that I'd found myself a job, and she was visibly relieved.
By Rebekah Conard5 days ago in Journal
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Very meta-poetry and well crafted. The closing verse, “ Life's absurdity put in a hearse,” buttons up the main message with dark elegance.
I'm a sucker for a brilliant limerick. Well done!
Brilliant! Glad it placed!
I have followed, you've definitely captured my attention! I will find time to read more of what have skillfully learned to share as is the case with so many of us here on Vocal side by side in the entanglement of capturing life into words! :-)
I loved this. Well done and congrats.