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life-giving water

love

By billPublished 16 days ago 1 min read
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The water from the forest smells like the mountains.

My father says it's wood leaf water.

People who drink this water often will suck the oil out of their bodies.

It makes you scrape your stomach and intestines.

The water flowed into the valley stream and went around the house.

I played in the stream and bathed in the fish.

Watching my mother, washing away the sweet and sour of life one at a time

I grew up with flocks of ducks by the water.

At that time, the color of the water was crystal clear

It was even sweet and delicious. The trickling water nourished the village.

The water never returns, taking with it the years of our youth.

My sisters and I, a lifetime of memories

Now, the water has changed color

It's changed its direction.

I'm a thousand miles away from the sea, scooping up a dipper of water

But I can't drink the taste of my hometown anymore.

Elegy
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  • Alex H Mittelman 16 days ago

    Fantastic poem!

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