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Let Self Grow…

An introspective commentary on rising above stagnancy.

By Kece SunrosePublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Let Self Grow…
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With a chance to grow,

An odd becomes even,

If one is to let life flow.

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How would I know-

When hard times are leaving,

If afraid to let them go?

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Some say that life’s a show,

With broad appeal grieving,

Exclusive to I? no!

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Idle watching idols glow,

Suffering from a lack of receiving,

Crying at every sight of a crow.

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Smoke substances blow,

As a sign of relieving-

All the thoughts that makes me woe.

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Shallow dreams take me low,

Maybe pauses achieving,

But how could I ever grow?

If I never know!

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Villanelle
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  • Anna 3 months ago

    Well done!

  • This was very deep and thought provoking. Loved your poem!

  • Darkos4 months ago

    Woaw really love it 💗!

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