Land of Amber Grain
A Tyrant’s Lost is Freedom Gain
The missiles we make they go real fast
With a ‘tronic punch and deadly bash
Better weapons, there may not be
Part of the call to Guard the free
Protecting the land of amber grain
Where liberty’s torch will never wain
The missiles we use aught to scare you bad
You best make sure we don’t get mad
Because if you dare us, don’t you see
We will lock one on and set you free
Protecting the land of Amber Grain
Crowning good is our refrain
So if you’re smart, and if you’re a wise
Then, by now you realize
We’re not playing some stupid game
If you get caught, then you’re to blame
Protecting the land of Amber Grain
The Liberty Bell and the fruited plain
If you choose to call our hand
Then be prepared for our stand
For ours is the side of righteous power
We’re heroes stand and villains cower
Protecting the land of Amber grain
Where a tyrants lost is A freedom gain
I said a tyrant loss is a freedoms gain
About the Creator
Mark Stigers
One year after my birth sputnik was launched, making me a space child. I did a hitch in the Navy as a electronics tech. I worked for Hughes Aircraft Company for quite a while. I currently live in the Saguaro forest in Tucson Arizona
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Review: Land of Amber Grain Author: Mark Stigers In the poem "Land of Amber Grain," Mark Stigers encapsulates the essence of patriotism, freedom, and the resolute defense of one's homeland. Here's an overview of the poem: Strengths: Patriotic Imagery: The poem is rich in patriotic imagery, invoking symbols of liberty such as the land of amber grain, liberty's torch, and the Liberty Bell. These images contribute to a sense of national pride and evoke a strong connection to the ideals of freedom. Powerful Tone: The poem carries a powerful and assertive tone, emphasizing the strength and determination of those who guard the land. The use of phrases like "protecting the land of Amber Grain" and "crowning good is our refrain" reinforces a commitment to defending the nation and its values. Warning and Deterrence: The lines warning about the consequences of challenging or daring the protectors add a layer of deterrence, suggesting that there are serious repercussions for those who oppose the defenders of freedom. Clear Rhyme Scheme: The poem follows a clear rhyme scheme, which contributes to its rhythmic flow and makes it easily accessible to readers. The simplicity of the rhyme scheme complements the straightforward message of the poem. Areas for Consideration: Balancing Imagery and Message: While the patriotic imagery is strong, some lines may lean towards a more assertive and potentially confrontational tone. Striking a balance between emphasizing strength and inviting diplomacy could enhance the poem's impact. Exploration of Complexity: The poem presents a clear message but might benefit from exploring the complexities of safeguarding freedom, acknowledging the challenges, and promoting understanding among nations. Conclusion: "Land of Amber Grain" is a patriotic poem that captures the spirit of defending one's homeland with resolute determination. The vivid imagery and assertive tone contribute to the poem's impact, making it a compelling expression of national pride and commitment to liberty. Overall Rating: 4/5 stars Chat gpt