Crack, veins rupture blue,
‘cross despair-full cavity
If only I was clay.
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Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
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Comments (7)
Wow, I feel the word .
The anguish of this poem juxtaposed with the perfect imperfection of kintsugi shows that some pieces are just unsalvageable. A sad poem indeed. Well done.
Powerful imagery.
Ooh, I love this 🖤 blue and gold make quite the pair
Impressive💕😊💖
That was so deep!
This says a lot. Very well done.