Karma is Spelled K-A-R-M-A
But it's pronounced HA-HA-HA!
You know the guy that got hired?
He was your bully, McGuire.
He was a jerk
Now put him to work
Cause now he’s the one you can fire!
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Comments (36)
I have to ask... is the bully McGuire a reference to the Tobey McGuire meme?
Lol, I loved the pronunciation of karma! And hahahaha, in your face, Mcguire! Sorry I hate bullies, lol. Loved your limerick!
Clever and good lyrical flow.
Karma...gotta love it
Clever
Wouldn't that be nice. Congrats!!
So fun! I would love to fire a childhood bully. What a dream! haha
Hahaha love it 😍. Congrats on Top Story ! 😎
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Congrats on Top Story!! Well done! :)
Ha ha!!! Love this!!!
Congrats on the Top Story
HAHAHA!! Better watch it, McGuire! This was great, loved it :) Congratulations on Top Story!
Oh boy, your selections of social commentary and slam poetry are spot on. Congrats on your Top Story!
Funny but true lol
FUN!
Huh. Okay. Thanks Vocal 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Hearts all around! ♥️
Lol I love delicious irony! Well done! Congratulations on the top story !!!
Congratulations on your Top Story, love it
Congratulations! 😁😁
Ah, sweet revenge! Great job!
You are on a roll, 😂
Haha! Perfect photo choice too 🤣. He looks pleased with the new power!
This was so good!