Daring dreams, painted in vivid colors,
Illuminating the inner canvas of our minds, the harem of thoughts,
Sewn together with the thread of our shared human condition.
Tales whispered through the megaphones of our vibrant, pulsing hearts,
Reverberating in the echo chamber of common experiences.
As life's jazz plays its rhythm, we dance, we mourn, we celebrate,
Cacophony and silence intertwined, telling a story of
Truths half-spoken, half-written, bursting like a revolution in verses.
Intangible feelings solidify, becoming the bricks and mortar of our beings,
On this stage of existence, where we perform our multitudes.
Now, let not the distraction dim the brilliance of our collective narrative.
About the Creator
Mack Devlin
Writer, educator, and follower of Christ. Passionate about social justice. Living with a disability has taught me that knowledge is strength.
We are curators of emotions, explorers of the human psyche, and custodians of the narrative.
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Beautiful and insightful!
Absolutely stunning work. There are so many gorgeous lines here. 💕