She ate all the food in one sitting
Her jeans were no longer fitting
tugging the waist
In absolute haste
Laughing, a fate to which she was submitting
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Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (3)
Very Clever! Well done! 😊
Lol, I believe everyone would be able to relate to this!
Lordy, I have been doing that a lot. Now I am fat. Ha ha. Love it.