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Jack and the mouse

Limerick

By Karun Published 14 days ago 1 min read
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There was an old dilapidated and haunted house

jack entered the abandoned place with a crouse

jack heard a noice and soon evade

for no reson Jack was afraid

there were heard a great squeaks of mice

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Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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  • Esala Gunathilake13 days ago

    Keep up the good work

  • Shauna Mullen14 days ago

    hey there! This is a powerful piece, a few little criticisms: Spelling mistakes take away from the piece, for example, "noice" should be "noise" and the last sentence is pretty confusing, I would try rewriting it like: they heard the great squeaks of mice- or something along those lines powerful poem nonetheless

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