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Invisible Girl

a villanelle of regret

By Judey Kalchik Published 10 months ago • 1 min read
Runner-Up in Villanelle of Regret Challenge
Invisible Girl
Photo by Miah Dailey on Unsplash

You see the whole world from the backseat

Don’t draw attention or make a sound

If you behave they give you a treat

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Keep your clothes clean and neat

(Don’t make me turn this car around)

You see the whole world from the backseat

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Good girls are polite, stay calm and sweet

Rehearse I Spy, pantomime Lost & Found

If you behave they give you a treat

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You just couldn’t do it; again you’ll be beat

Curl up small, little snivel-sobbing mound

You see the whole world from the backseat

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Make a wish, closed eyes! Don’t cheat!

Someday. No rules. You no longer bound

You see the whole world from the backseat

If you behave they give you a treat

Villanelle

About the Creator

Judey Kalchik

It's my time to find and use my voice.

Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.

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    Written by Judey Kalchik