i'm the guy that
would get a uni degree
just to make a point
just to make you see
to show you with clarity
what you lack to see
you're completely fucking wrong
and will always be
but this glorious vision of yours
won't let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
you don't know
what you've lost
you count the battles
not what they cost
you ignore the values
chasing the price
you've mistaken a virtue
and created a vice
but this glorious vision of yours
won't let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
every time i see
a glimmer of hope
your stupid mouth
it betrays you
every single word
you utter
makes me scream
silently inside
but this glorious vision of yours
won’t let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
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Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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1977
1977 - I remember the year like it was today. Newly nineteen and newlyweds. Your hair was like goldenrod. Your dress framed your body perfectly. Your lips sang to me all the way down the aisle. We were young and smart, not dumb, I think. You are still my sweet everything after all these years. It brings tears to my eyes when I think about how well we still suit each other. You make familiar look gorgeous! Thank you for trusting me and caring for me the way you always do. I sometimes get lost with dreams but you always do the best to make those dreams reality.
By Rowan Finley 3 days ago in Poets
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That was just awesome song! I loved it! I would compare this ‘seeing internally’ to a psychiatrist who can prescribe a medication, but he or she knows nothing about what’s happening inside, even after studying and practicing for bloody long years. That’s just mad. And he/she is taking money for it to ‘help’ (at least the medication supposed to). What a nonsense, right? I feel like a slave sometimes, stipulated on the price sold by them.
Yes!!