Quick note: I wrote this typical stream, free verse that I sometimes do without much thought a couple of weeks ago, just needed to give it a quick edit. I love the word insular and the meaning too, so thought that could be a good word to use for the challenge in repeating lines.. Yet, as per usual I’ve realised it doesn’t fulfil the criteria as I have a silly habit of skimming over criteria in challenges and there’s nothing satirical about this! 😂 So it is not an entry! Oh well. I always march to the beat of my own drum, so that’s that. 😄
“Insular primarily means being isolated, detached, or having a narrow, restricted outlook on the world”. - Cambridge Dictionary
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cotton socks
pulled up tightly
enclosed in a warm blanket
safely cocooned
no bother peering outside
exit doors?
cover those eyes
wearing an eye mask (literally)
like those you get on the plane
to maximise eternal sleep
better to dream than to be preyed on
insular space
mine
not their’s or your’s
leaving? might tomorrow
might not
insular now
no one understands
no matter how many times..
people disappoint
safer to stay in
who has the energy for drama?
yet it comes with a cost and
there’s a certain complicity
that the mind brushes aside
if one is insular too long
troubling one’s self..
tucked-up in a heated blanket
outside?
not today
or the next,
or even the day after that
too many competing thoughts in the head
That must be worked through systematically
so they don’t snarl at each other anymore
and yet in time there’s a peace in silently enjoying
one’s own company
zen eventually appears
i am good
i am zen
i am insular
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