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In the world today

Hopeless. Lightless. Joyless. Trapped.

By Alexander McEvoyPublished 7 months ago 2 min read
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In the world today
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Wrath.

In the world today

In the world today

We are governed by rage

Yet told not to feel it

Told to ignore it

To simply accept it.

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Sorrow

In the world today

In the world today

We are bombarded by sadness

Yet told to embrace it

Told to wallow in it

To simply accept it.

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Helplessness,

In the world today

In the world today

We are forced into a position of inaction

Yet told to refuse it

Told to fight it

To simply reject it.

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Hopelessness.

In the world today

In the world today

We are pursued by inability

Yet told to embrace it

Told to wallow in it

To simply accept it

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Inaction

In the world today

In the world today

We are crushed by the desire to be alone

Yet told to refuse it

Told to fight it

To simply reject it

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In the world today

In the world today

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We are pushed and we are pulled

Hither and thither

Yes and no

We are punished for speaking out

We are abused for staying silent.

Stay and go.

Soaring and drowning.

We are crushed and we are liberated.

Please do not resist.

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In the world today

In the world today

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Stay still

Or stay in motion

Neither a good option

Both an act of will.

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Useless

Useful

Wrong in thought

Wrong in deed.

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In the world today

In the world today

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Impotently we stare at that which we would change

Actively we strive for joy long lasting

Restricted in our impact's range

Lamented in our wakeless passing.

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In the world today

In the world today

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To stay in place would be jolly

To go forth would be folly

Yet so too the reverse is true

Yet so too whatever we do

No matter what our class or age

No matter from what we make our cage

To stay would be jolly

To go would be folly

Yet so too the reverse is true

Yet we remain trapped, whatever we do.

Our choice is wrong.

Be in deed or song.

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In the world today

In the world today

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About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

I hope you enjoy what you read and I can't wait to see your creations :)

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  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Awesome!!! Lovely lyrics!!! Authentic!!! Sang & lived it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Antoinette L Brey6 months ago

    the world today is a mess. Well done

  • Denise E Lindquist6 months ago

    Very well done. Thank you😊💕

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    Wow! This is fantastic and should be a TS. Well done.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    Wow, this was really emotional for me! I could feel this sense of being stuck or frozen in time/ action. I got this sense of a crushing weigh from expectations and the weight of the world. I also love the impact the repetitive language had on the overall piece, it was very cleverly done!! Great work Alex!! Also, if I misinterpreted please correct me!! I am the worst at interpreting poetry, like it just goes over my head and I can't grasp it very well!!

  • ThatWriterWoman7 months ago

    Brilliant use of repetition! Nicely done!

  • Rob Angeli7 months ago

    Yes, full on attack of the damned if you do, damned if you don't. Good use of strophe forms and refrain the explore, get the message across, even give an obsessive incantatory sway to it. Well versed.

  • Your poem made me remember the times I broke down crying because I couldn't do anything during the Russian Ukraine war. My therapist told me not to worry about things I couldn't control. But it truly breaks my heart! Your poem was so relatable!

  • Donna Renee7 months ago

    oooof. Nicely done. this feels way too on point, doesn't it?😥

  • Lamar Wiggins7 months ago

    Wow! Som many layers of thought. So much truth to contemplate and wonder where I stand and which direction the world is going. Well done indeed!

  • ARC7 months ago

    Man this is giving me Linkin Park vibes. Really well-written, Alexander. Lots (and lots) (and lots) of food for thought. Great work.

  • Test7 months ago

    I'm not entirely sure why but this made me think og 'First they came' by Pastor Martin Niemoller. Beautifully written but tragically true of out life and times. And many that came before 🤍

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