In the ARMS OF LOVE...
<4 Tha Quadru-Haiku Challenge>
In the arms of LOVE...
waterfalls of solemn tears...
instantly dry up...
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Reaching Out
I promise her. I'd do anything for her. She's my mom. Even as Lanie and Deanna are flying home, Mom is scrappy fighting dying. She lays too still in that too-big bed with all the toasty white hospital blankets, in the south tower, at the broad end of a long slow-turning corner that delivers me again to her private room with the view she can't see through, with the beeping that tells us nothing new, and all these ice chips she can't swallow, and a flood of well-intentioned nurses who cannot do a damned thing all the same.
By Christy Munson4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (38)
This is an absolutely beautiful haiku!!
You are on a roll with Haiku poetry 🥰👏
Good
I love it!💕
So simple yet so true
Excellent! And, Congrats Tiffany! Well deserved.
This is really beautiful ❤️
Lovely sentiment. Words to cry for.
Simply beautiful.
🤠💥💥
I like your use of punctuation :) I always forget about punctuation possibilities while writing haikus 😅
Great imagery
wow, I really love the vivid imagery, brilliant :)
Awww, this was sooooo sweet! And wooohooooo congratulations on your Top Story!
Beautiful! Tiffany. Congratulations on Top Story 🥰
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I cried
So beautiful!!!! "Waterfalls of solemn tears." Gorgeous ❤️ Congratulations on Top story!
Beautiful imagery! Congrats on top story
Awesome story.❤️congrats 🎉🎉!
Congratulations 🎊 great job
Very pretty! Good job - and congrats on Top Story!
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Congratulations on your beautiful top story Tiff!!!!
Congratulations 🎉 🥰😉Top Storyyyyy❗❗❗❗❗❗