In formation
Molecules on the brink
When the temperature plummets
The wild ones settle down
Those in flight lose their momentum, they seek a place to land and regroup
Condensing on anything cool and smooth
Those phrenetic ones
Those little buzzing kinetic ones
Those party molecules
Who roil and roam with their fellows,
They stop their raves
For now they only have the energy to
Mill about
They begin to line up
Outside your window
For the Great Calm
They get in formation
Not for battle but for your information
They crystallize
On the pane
And they shimmer in the starlight
All to tell you
You
Should
Stay
Under
Your
Blankets
Those molecules
They still have a pulse, but they won’t rave or fly again,
Not until the sun comes next Spring
They have formed rigid marriages,
Like fairy-sized gemstones
Because that’s the way they like to freeze.
They click and clack as they huddle in step
A billion tiny firecrackers
Lining up side by side,
Rank and file
And in the grass
Below your window the frost creaks as it claims the fallen leaves
The moisture has all left the air, there is only oxygen and nitrogen
And all of it chilled to an electric blue
Crack your window:
Can you smell it?
The air is pure of all water
Zero percent humidity
Except where you breathe,
Plumes of dragon smoke rush from your lungs to the dry, empty air
Breathe it in,
Cold,
Scratch some of the frost with your thumbnail
If you were to go outside, into the night,
You’d crunch the frosted leaves beneath your slippers
There is a puddle out there
With a layer of glass over its surface
And an ocean of liquid water underneath
A puddle
The model
Of Jupiter’s moons
If you were to
Step
Gently,
Just hard enough to crack the ice
But not hard enough to plunge your toes into the frigid sea,
You would see the space
Beneath your shivers
Beneath your slipper
Beneath your soul
And beneath your sole
Where molecules are on the brink
The tipping point
These waters are the last remnants of fall, holding out against the steady approach of winter
And if you were to press an ear to the cold surface
Maybe you would hear them
Molecules
Clicking and clacking
Clicking
And
Clacking
Into formation
The waters are losing
They are freezing
This puddle will not last the night
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Sam Spinelli
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