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If We Stood on the Shore

Poem by N. Wilkinson with Latin text attributed to Thomas of Celano (c.1200–1265)

By Natalie WilkinsonPublished about a year ago 2 min read
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Spiral Jetty 1970 By Robert Smithson Photo: N. Wilkinson

If we stood together on the shore of the Great Salt Lake and cried our tears until none were left, would the brine shrimp return?

Lacrimosa dies illa

Qua resurget ex favilla

Judicandus homo reus.

Would the starving birds be filled?

Would a great enough sorrow alleviate the destruction we have caused?What justice does sorrow hold when it cannot mitigate death?

They are inequivalent concepts.

What is the composition of tears?

From E=mc² we are born, mc²=E our dust returns in a cycle of endless incarnation.

Energy to matter, matter to energy.

Lacrimosa dies illa

Qua resurget ex favilla

Judicandus homo reus.

Moving water, we wrest it from one place and deposit it in another.

Use it clean and living; return it sullied in the throes of death.

We are living at the expense of all else.

We return to the earth only our refuse and the dust of our bodies.

Lacrimosa dies illa

Qua resurget ex favilla

Judicandus homo reus.

E=mc²

If we cried together until we were dry as the lake bed and, shrinking like Alice, fell into our own tears and swam, would the Wonderland return?

I listen to the voices of scientists while driving along the dehydrated shore.

I have never heard a biologist cry before.

They know a lake we can only imagine, not her silent, inanimate bed, but a pool of riches.

Lacrimosa dies illa

Qua resurget ex favilla

Judicandus homo reus.

At the end of life, our tears are fewer.

Therefore, the young must cry.

~

There is life in salted water.

A being on the verge of death, in hospice, to use our own euphemism.

To break it gently to the living that there is no justice in death.

Great Salt Lake, Utah from Antelope Island State Park, September 2022. The white in the background is salt in the dried lake bed of the bay. The thin dark grey line is the opposite shoreline. The sky is grey with smoke from fires in Idaho five hours' drive away. Photo: N. Wilkinson

Thank you for reading my words. We took a trip out to Salt Lake City this September to visit a daughter who lives in the western United States. We spent some time on the Great Salt Lake, which has receded 1–2 miles from its traditional shoreline in many places. The cover photo of Robert Smithson's 1970 piece Spiral Jetty taken in September of 2022, demonstrates the extent to which the water has receded from the shore. The art installation is designed to be surrounded by water. The rocks are usually white with salt.

Some of the material I used as inspiration for this piece is indicated below:

While we were driving around the lake, a friend sent us a must-listen-to podcast about the state of the lake by RadioWest entitled, “ The State and Fate of the Great Salt Lake, Part IV”.

While researching the composition of tears compared to the composition of salt water I found a collective poetry project called “irreplaceable: a collective praise poem for Great Salt Lake” by Nan Seymour and others. It has some very beautiful lines.

The Latin in my verses is taken from Mozart’s Requiem Mass written in 1791. The text is attributed to Thomas of Celano (c.1200–1265). This text also came to mind while researching tears. An approximate English translation (I am not a Latin scholar) of the text reads:

On a tearful day, man(kind) will rise from the ashes to be judged.

I also want to thank Medium author Tyler Neylon. Without his informative article, E=mc² would look like E=mc2. Thank you to the folks at Google Translate, Wikipedia, and Grammarly. I don’t know how I lived without you.

This poem was originally published on Medium.

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About the Creator

Natalie Wilkinson

Writing. Woven and Printed Textile Design. Architectural Drafting. Learning Japanese. Gardening. Not necessarily in that order.

IG: @maisonette _textiles

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  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Well done!!! Subscribed 💖💖💕

  • Cendrine Marrouat12 months ago

    What a powerful poem! One of the best I have read on Vocal. Raises so many questions, while giving us the option to choose our own answer. Have you thought of turning it into a spoken word piece?

  • Allie Bickertonabout a year ago

    Lovely. The opening line is my favorite part. 💕

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