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If I Could...

A children's poem

By Ruth StewartPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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If I Could...
Photo by Taylor Heery on Unsplash

If I could do anything

I’d make it so you could bounce on mushrooms,

And wear a red hat and save a princess,

With your moustache on, just for fun.

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If I could, I would make sure

You could run as fast as you wanted,

So, you could beat a blue hedgehog

Wearing white gloves.

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If I could, I’d make you able to fly

Like a superhero in the sky,

Rescuing people

Putting villains away.

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I can’t do that.

I’m a Mum.

I can make your favourite for dinner, though!

What will it be?

childrens poetry
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About the Creator

Ruth Stewart

I'm a grandmother of four amazing grandchildren and a mum of three fabulous children. I write poetry mainly, also prose and the odd story. I live in Scotland, UK. For a secret link to watch me read my favourite poems click right here!

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  • MT Poetry11 months ago

    Thank you for sharing this whimsical and heartwarming post. It reminds me of the power of imagination and the importance of nurturing and cherishing the simple pleasures in life, like a special dinner shared with loved ones.💕🥰

  • Harmony Kent11 months ago

    You had me at ‘bouncing on mushrooms’! So much fun and loving in this. Fantastic, Ruth. I can so see you writing a children’s book 💕🙂

  • You are the bestest superhero to ever exist! Awesome poem!

  • Kendall Defoe 11 months ago

    Nice work... Beats what I had Ms. Pac-Man and Donkey Kong doing for me... ;)

  • Dana Stewart11 months ago

    So incredibly sweet and hopeful. You know, I think you are on your way to writing a children's book. This is a really great start.

  • Heather Hubler11 months ago

    My favorite meal is the one I don't have to make, so I love the superpower that mum has. This was a complete delight to read, and I was imagining myself as each of those things. Loved it, Ruth :)

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Oh, you are on fire! This was brilliant. Flawless. Every single word had its place and it just flowed wonderfully! Bravo!

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