If I should leave this mortal world
Cry not for me
For, like the magnificent and splendid phoenix
I shall rise again
Majestic, alluring and glorious shall be my form
Rising, rising pretty as a picture up to the heavens
From the ashes of my earthly beginnings
I shall rule the sky and air
Be immortal for ever more
No longer will I have a care for the mortality
Of the given number of my years
I shall be reborn of the sun
Obtain new life from the flames
In colors of gold and scarlet I will rise
Supernatural and pure
I shall soar like the eagle
And live for ever more
Free from the cares and restrictions
Of a life numbered in such fleeting years
I shall at last, be free!
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Comments (13)
Beautiful
I love that this poem served as a metaphor for what death and the afterlife means to you! It's striking, beautiful written and so elegantly illustrated! Breath taking!
Oh wowww, this was sooooo powerful! You go girl! I loved this so much!
So much hope and splendor, really beautiful.
Beautiful piece. Well done
ππβΊοΈFly high!!! Wonderful work.
This is a great piece, Novel.
Inspiring! Well done!
Beautiful writing & Amazing Inspiration!
This is Great ππππππ―π
"From the ashes." Beautiful.
"I shall at last be free" Don't we all want that
That image and your powerful, inspirational words are truly awesome Novel! Loved this a lot!