“I may be going but I'll never leave you.”
In a world carved out of pain and sorrow
Those were your final words to me
They warmed my heart on many a cold night
When everything was falling apart I stood up
I stood upon those words like a tightrope walker
Balancing myself between life and death
Your voice was always softer than any blanket
I wrapped myself in it like a trembling child
And in the middle of my winter night
There was a song in the darkness:
"All these things we dearly hold
One day, we'll need to let them go
You cry and cry and cry
Yet
The dead don't die
They just live on in your mind."
I took great comfort in that song
When all other songs had failed me
When no mask or armor could hide these scars
And no stars were bright enough to guide me
That is when I heard your sweet voice
More soothing than honeyed tea
You lit up my soul when there was no light
In a dream, in a vision, you told me this:
"I hope the spring taught you;
That life always comes back.
I hope the sun taught you;
That everything will rise again."
I took great comfort in that vision
And finally, I know this:
The scars on your heart
Draw a map of the universe
Use your pain as a compass
To guide you back to what is beautiful
And so
When those curtains fall
Like evening stars
On that stage of your existence
Deep in the theater of dream
Take comfort, my friend, my lover:
“I may be going but I'll never leave you.”
About the Creator
Miles Pen
I'm a Native American artist and storyteller who enjoys creating new things.
* Nitsiniiyi'taki ("I Thank You" in Blackfeet)
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This was absolutely beautiful! Loved the line 'Use your pain as a compass'! Brilliant use of imageries. I loved this poem so much! 💖 I've also subscribed to you! 😊