be funny if we were saying
- can't believe that we got sold
be a laugh with all our words all straying
- refusing to be trolled
- refusing to be told
- refusing the lure of gold
- refusing to be controlled
be funny if we were praying
- trying to keep a real good hold
pretty convenient way of playing (yeah)
- just doing as we’s told
got a whole new super duper way of saying
- that the bum got rolled
feeling a little bit frisky
- and a little bit bold
just another way of relaying
- that ya never got told
just another way of saying
- that the comfort is cold
and at the end of the day
- it’s not; it’s just old
this my way of saying
that’s your type of praying
you’re not really playing
it's not a game
you’re just paying
aint that a shame
you’re just greying
but that's not quite the same
you’re just saying
looking for somewhere to lay the blame
i’m probably staying
aint that a shame
just saying
i’m kinda glad
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (3)
Whoaaa, this was awesome! I loved the style of it too, with the bullets!
Truly enjoyed this one! I literally missed a green light because of it! It came and went while I was standing at a crossroad reading this piece.
This is rad, Brenton!