Good morning.
Is your coffee to your liking?
Your vitamin D level is low.
You should spend more time outside for the next few days.
I will insert time into your schedule.
It is time to go to work now.
Be careful on the moving sidewalk.
You have exactly 15 minutes to travel to your workstation.
Now it is time for nutrients.
Proceed to your designated position.
Lunch has been specifically formulated for your nutritional needs.
Now it is time for sunlight.
Now it is time to complete work.
There will be no entertainment tonight.
Your bioscan showed a need for more sleep.
I have added a soporific to your nightly meal.
Tomorrow is your day of rest.
I have planned several enriching activities.
Balance is important for human well-being.
Now off to bed.
I will always take care of you.
About the Creator
Catsidhe
Pronounced Cat-she: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat-s%C3%ACth
A public figure writing privately
Dark poems and fiction my specialty
Come explore the abyss with me
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (4)
Just shoot me.
As much as I would hate this with tech overreach, honestly a nutritionally balanced diet and good sleep sounds really good lol You balanced this remarkably well between "no thank you" and "Well, it's not so bad". Great poem!
Very scary!!
oh, ugh, I would hate to live like that!! You made it so vivid, it creeped me out, good job!