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Disseminate the Positive and Endeavor to Eliminate the Negative!

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 24 days ago β€’ Updated 24 days ago β€’ 1 min read
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I'm talking about pain...

I'm talking about Sunshine

I'm talking about Rain...

Obfuscate my mind,

Where is my luck?

Some days are hard

And I feel like

Giving up...

Motionless waiting for daylight

To soak up this misery...

I became magnetic to


Obscene thoughts turn into manifestations...

I precipitate myself with confidence and put my fears to rest...

Alone in my planet...

Alone with myself...

No applause

Just Beautiful silence...

Soft whispers in my mind,

Chanted β€œYou can Win”

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Your Mind is

A Wonderland of

Your Imagination

Make it Beautiful!

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  • Novel Allen8 days ago

    Talk, Handsome, talk. Speak for us all. Tipsy Tuesday. πŸ˜‚πŸ€©

  • Natalie Stover9 days ago

    Love this and it’s tipsy Tuesday πŸ₯°

  • Donna Fox22 days ago

    Lonzo I love the opposing language you use in the beginning. This was such a passionate and fulfilling piece! Nicely done!

  • This was so powerful and uplifting!

  • Beautiful.

  • Lamar Wiggins24 days ago

    Way to get it all out on the table. Great read, Lonzo. πŸ’–

  • Gina C.24 days ago

    Oh, this is empowering! Absolutely love this:)

  • Tiffany Gordon 24 days ago

    Powerful, well written, inspirational & flyy! I love it! Way 2 Go little bro! 😁

  • Wow, that’s a very powerful and expressive poem. I admire your courage and creativity. Thank you for sharing your poem.

  • J. S. Wade24 days ago

    Believe it! 😎 great expressions we all need to hear! πŸ₯°

  • Roy Stevens24 days ago

    I feel like cheering now! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—β—

  • This was an unexpected definition in the poetic concept of β€œme”. I found it enlightening and refreshing

  • Grz Colm24 days ago

    Abundance rocks! 😁Just the feeling of it! Then we will attract more (I hope).😊 Thanks for sharing!!

  • Phil Flannery24 days ago

    Well done

  • I'm talking about another great job

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