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I Dreamed

... and the elements came alive

By Rick Henry Christopher Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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I dreamed of water

Then I dreamed of the hot sun

I woke scorched and wet

performance poetrysurreal poetrynature poetry
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About the Creator

Rick Henry Christopher

Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.

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  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    What an change up, I love it

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    This one really does feel like a dream!

  • Megabout a year ago

    Beautiful imagery!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Sometimes dreams do come true in a weird way... Loved this one and definitely hearted it.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This is clever. You really will sweat through your clothes by falling asleep in the sun. It makes me yearn for summertime. Oh, to be on a beach somewhere... 🥹

  • Irene Economouabout a year ago

    Did you remember applying some SPF 30+ sunscreen? 🌞 Kidding aside, very nicely done, Rick!! 🥰

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Combination for danger. Be thou careful.

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  • Nicely done❤️❗

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Excellent imagery. I’m always fearful of dreaming about water. 😂. Great Haiku Rick. 🥰

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