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I Dreamed

... and the elements came alive

By Rick HenryPublished 14 days ago Updated 13 days ago 1 min read

I dreamed of water

Then I dreamed of the hot sun

I woke scorched and wet

performance poetrysurreal poetrynature poetry

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Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.


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  • Veronica Coldiron5 days ago

    This one really does feel like a dream!

  • Meg5 days ago

    Beautiful imagery!

  • Lamar Wiggins11 days ago

    Sometimes dreams do come true in a weird way... Loved this one and definitely hearted it.

  • Gina C.13 days ago

    This is clever. You really will sweat through your clothes by falling asleep in the sun. It makes me yearn for summertime. Oh, to be on a beach somewhere... 🥹

  • Irene Economou13 days ago

    Did you remember applying some SPF 30+ sunscreen? 🌞 Kidding aside, very nicely done, Rick!! 🥰

  • Novel Allen13 days ago

    Combination for danger. Be thou careful.

  • Nicely done❤️❗

  • Scott Wade14 days ago

    Excellent imagery. I’m always fearful of dreaming about water. 😂. Great Haiku Rick. 🥰

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