Flaming red sun,
Rays out like a peacock,
Falls beneath the horizon.
I learn. There’s a way
How to surrender proudly.
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T. Licht
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Dear Mr. Omnipresent
I know you’re busy and all, and there’s billions of people that probably need your attention more than me, but please, I’m struggling to hold on. Matter of fact, I have nothing left to hold on to. I need to know why I’m here, because I’m tired. I don’t wanna do this anymore! I'm so alone! Nothing I do is ever successful. I’m embarrassed to admit that I’m worthless. Hello? Never mind. I don’t know why I still bother…
By Real Poetic6 days ago in Poets
Comments (7)
Liked it T.
So empowering
great poets
wow! nice poem!
I LOVE THIS!! The depth is evident and the concept is beautiful!
You have beautifully captured the nature's beauty in the first two lines...just stole my soul.I completely surrender myself to these words.
Stunning work!