My friend posted the following word on her Facebook page. I LOVED it and had to try and use it for the home challenge. Although I am of Welsh ancestry and a fan of Dylan Thomas, I suppose I run the risk of misunderstanding and misusing the term. Yet, I will endeavor...
HIRAETH-noun (Welsh) A spiritual longing for a home which maybe never was. Nostalgia for ancient places to which we cannot return. It is the echo of the lost places of our soul's (souls'?) past and our grief for them. It is in the wind, and the rocks, and the waves. It is nowhere and it is everywhere.
HIRAETH
Shutting my eyes,
I walk blindly through now non-existent rooms.
I can feel every crack in the cool linoleum,
The texture of each smooth brick in the fireplace.
I smell the pot roast my deceased mother is cooking,
Hear my long-gone father pulling his car into the garage
And the sound of glasses clanking together as I set an imaginary table.
HIRAETH
Like the other 99%,
I wear a distorted lens,
Retaining polarizing Polaroids-
Snapshots of scenes
From both the Hallmark channel
And some lurid Lifetime movie
I choose to forget.
The hand that wrote all the warm and funny tags
Scotch taped to the presents in my Christmas stocking
Also penned suicide notes
Left for my young eyes to see,
And the arm that held me secure in the water
As I learned to paddle and kick
Became a fist striking my older brother.
HIRAETH
Even when I open my eyes to the shortcomings
Of my loved ones,
Even when I stumble over grace
And want to set a course of forgiveness,
I can carry bits of unknown painful, fiery
Ice-cold Hell inside,
That eats away at my insides.
I know that I can set out for new latitudes,
New longitudes
And change my travelling companions,
But keep a ticking bomb within.
HIRAETH
Jesus shouts that the kingdom is within...
I try to leap off the windy high place
And smack the hard ground,
Bruised.
Must I walk on the water??
Or merely grip tight His hand??
Yet, I am certain the road inside
Leads to real Love.
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Julia Schulz
I enjoy crafting poetry and telling stories. I especially love being in the "zone" when I take a deep dive with my subject matter, developing characters and settings and researching topics like history and sustainable living.
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