Don't Turn Around Challenge - The Prompt: Write a poem about the feeling that something is behind you.
You sense it before you see it. This challenge builds on anticipation and the fear of what stays just out of view. Stay with that feeling of being followed or watched. The presence may never fully appear, but it should shape the poem’s movement and tone.
Think about how the tension sticks even when nothing is proven. What’s left unseen can feel just as strong as anything you show.
One day as I sat on a bench in the park,
I had this feeling that someone was watching me.
It was slowly getting dark
I turned my head to see
who was watching me.
First in one direction
and then the other.
Did I need protection
in the park? Oh brother!
I saw no one, why worry?
I couldn't shake the memory
of another woman
accosted by a man
not that long ago
Good God no!
My imagination...
running rampant
~
Then a revelation
there was an encampment
It was in the trees
all around me and a breeze
revealed a young face looking
down on me. How was I missing
this here. I had never seen
it before. What a scene
direct from a fiction movie
it looked kind of groovy
I'm sure it is not and I'm sorry
but tomorrow I will bring food
Now I will be on my way
This put me in a mood
Time to go and come back another day.
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
Retired, working part-time as a Native American culture consultant. I have an MSE, and an ABD. I write on Vocal, and Facebook. Poetry, non-fiction mostly, and working on fiction. Wife, mother, grandmother, and great grandmother.
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