Heavy hands, Heavy head,
Heavy heart
Heavy
Harsh horizon
Happiness hidden
Hushed
Hatred heightened
Heartless hostility
Holding Heavily
Heaped heavily
Heaving
Happiness hastening
Hope helps
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Thanks for reading. I am sure we all feel like the above sometimes. This is for the Tautogram Challenge. I deviated from my attempts at U, V, W, X, Y, and Z tautograms as this came to me.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (20)
Hope does help. Wonderful tautogram 💖
I’ve read so many tautograms I am now reading the same ones again.🤣 Already liked this piece before, but great job Paul! 😊👍
Super H Tautogram!!! Left some love!!!
Great Tautogram Paul 🥰
Brilliant work Paul! I especially loved the last line! :)
Excellent poem 👍
Excellent use of words. Very well done.
Excellent challenge entry
This was absolutely fantastic and very relatable!
Hi, thanks for sharing, I’ve read and hearted. Here’s mine, if you would like to read my recent piece for the challenge. Many thanks. https://vocal.media/poets/miriam-the-butterfly
Well done, Paul!
This is great. Well done.
Describes so much for me right now. Excellent job!! 🥹❤️
Great job, Paul! Your use of alliteration in this tautogram is impressive, and the way you capture the heaviness and struggle of life is really powerful. I particularly like the contrast between "harsh horizon" and "happiness hidden" and the shift towards hope in the final stanza. Well done!
Very nicely done!
I really like this one, Paul!!
Good one buddy, 😀
Very nice, Paul!
Heavy indeed. Hope helps. Loved the way this evolved. Really fantastic work :) I felt every line.
Nice! Love it!