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For the Tautogram Challenge.

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Heavy hands, Heavy head,

Heavy heart


Harsh horizon

Happiness hidden


Hatred heightened

Heartless hostility

Holding Heavily

Heaped heavily


Happiness hastening

Hope helps


Thanks for reading. I am sure we all feel like the above sometimes. This is for the Tautogram Challenge. I deviated from my attempts at U, V, W, X, Y, and Z tautograms as this came to me.

I hope you enjoyed it. Please click the heart, leave a comment, share, do all that lovely stuff. If you wanna! I appreciate all interaction and feedback!

Here are a couple of other pieces I published recently:

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!


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  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    Hope does help. Wonderful tautogram 💖

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    I’ve read so many tautograms I am now reading the same ones again.🤣 Already liked this piece before, but great job Paul! 😊👍

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Super H Tautogram!!! Left some love!!!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Great Tautogram Paul 🥰

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Brilliant work Paul! I especially loved the last line! :)

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Excellent poem 👍

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    Excellent use of words. Very well done.

  • Excellent challenge entry

  • This was absolutely fantastic and very relatable!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Hi, thanks for sharing, I’ve read and hearted. Here’s mine, if you would like to read my recent piece for the challenge. Many thanks. https://vocal.media/poets/miriam-the-butterfly

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Well done, Paul!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is great. Well done.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Describes so much for me right now. Excellent job!! 🥹❤️

  • Mohamed Jakkathabout a year ago

    Great job, Paul! Your use of alliteration in this tautogram is impressive, and the way you capture the heaviness and struggle of life is really powerful. I particularly like the contrast between "harsh horizon" and "happiness hidden" and the shift towards hope in the final stanza. Well done!

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Very nicely done!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    I really like this one, Paul!!

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    Very nice, Paul!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Heavy indeed. Hope helps. Loved the way this evolved. Really fantastic work :) I felt every line.

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Nice! Love it!

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