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Healthy Lifestyle

In which focusing on the wrong problem comes at a cost

By Hannah MoorePublished about a year ago 1 min read
Healthy Lifestyle
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There was a young man who liked bacon.

They said that his health was forsaken.

They told him, try tofu,

He made it his go to,

Then died from cocaine inhalation.

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Hannah Moore

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Loved it, feel kind of bad for laughing though 😁

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    Oh boy, Hannah! What a morbid but kind of funny in a very dark sort of way, poem! The irony of it all! 💜

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Oh dear. How sad. Wrong switch eh!

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