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He was a cold killer

That killed in Fog

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

He was a cold killer

He walked in the fog

the city held its breath

stones slick beneath him

lamps dim and weak

he wore the night

he carried death

He killed in the fog

men drunk and staggering

coins jingling in pockets

laughter splitting the dark

voices blurred with ale

the mist swallowed it

He waited in corners

shadows clung like breath

he was smoke and shadow

a figure without name

the knife glimmered

patience kept him still

The men never saw

their cries went silent

blood ran on cobbles

the night stretched on

the city turned away

At dawn the bodies

slumped and empty

faces slack, lips parted

coins gone, knife wiped

fog lifting slowly

questions hung in smoke

Whispers spread

fear walked faster than wind

women pulled children close

men stared at corners

every step measured

every shadow cursed

He was a cold killer

he fed the fog

he gave streets silence

he left no mercy

Then he vanished

just as if never there.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk