happy doesn’t last
a tautogram
Hold her
Hug happiness hastily
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Hurry, hurry
Hell has heard
Hide
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Honour her
Heavens high humbled
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Hide, hide
Hell hisses hostilities
Hurry
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Hallucinate her,
Hurt her,
Hang her,
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Hell has hollowed her
Hurry, hide
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
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A Hiatus Turned Reflection
No, I wasn't dead, nor fighting off some great mystical beast tyrannizing a group of villagers. To those who look forward to what I have to say, or to put it better, write, I am genuinely sorry for my disappearance from the Vocal platform and community.
By Dailyn Townes2 days ago in Humans
Comments (13)
Damn it that is well done
Heavy!!! 💖💖💕
Wow, powerful tautogram!
❤️
Wow, beautiful, but truthful, deep, and raw ❤️
Very good and oh so truthful...
This was sooooo emotional yet so beautifully written!
Damn!!! Strong vivid imagery
Oh! I liked this one
This is great. Well done.
Tainted love, abused & from which we hide. But has hell hollowed her or have we. Are we the hell we so desperately fear? Oh yeah, we could spend a lot of time plumbing the depths of this tautogram. And as with William Carlos Williams' poem, "The Red Wheelbarrow", would we discover you were simply playing with words? I love it!
So powerful! Just awesome!
Truly breathtaking.