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etheree about a dinner falling apart

By Imola TóthPublished 10 months ago • 1 min read
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Hands

tremble

reach then stall

knuckles turn white

forks scrape thin plates, loud

bread goes stale, candles melt

wine rings bloom like raw, fresh wounds

a spoon circles the same cold soup

fingers tap apologies on wood

no one reaches for anything that breaks

An etheree is a very precise, structured poem. It does not require rhyme or any specific subject. The meaning supposed to unfold in the structure, which is: ten lines total, with the syllable count increasing by one in each line.

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    Written by Imola Tóth