Deep in forbidden woods
beneath a wide oak tree
there ran a river so pure
that the forest made a decree,
Let there live a troll
as ancient as the sea;
in my forest he will reside
and this river's protector he shall be.
From my forest he is made -
rocks, dirt, and moss too -
and if ever he is bested
I shall take back what is due.
Curious villagers wandered close
to the mystical river's edge
and there the troll would be waiting,
perched on a nearby ledge.
"If you wish to cross," he'd say,
"there is a price;
answer my riddle in one guess,
not twice and not thrice."
Many tried to cross the river
but not one could succeed
to solve the forest troll's riddles
and with their journeys proceed.
One day a young girl stopped
on the banks for a drink
when she heard a gravelly voice
that made her heart sink.
"I am the troll of the forest
and protector of the stream;
you have drank from sacred waters
and for your sins you must redeem.
Answer 'yes' to one question
if you wish to walk free,
and only if you are truthful
will I honor this decree."
The girl agreed to listen
for she had no choice,
and stood tall as she waited
for the command of the troll's voice.
"In this world of wonder,
there exists both joy and fright,
but is there such a thing
as love at first sight?"
The troll felt smug as he waited
for a reply from the young maid,
for he knew with no lovers
she had thus far laid.
At last the girl spoke
and her voice was sure,
"I do believe in love at first sight,
it is real and pure-".
"Liar," the troll cheered,
"You are far too young!
What of love
could you possibly know,
innocent one?"
The girl smiled at him
with her eyes shining bright,
and she spoke with soft wonder
in the warm summer light.
"When I wake in the morning
to my one room cottage,
I see my mother folding clothes
and my brother stirring porridge.
When I hear the goats mew
as the sun begins to set,
I see my father return from the fields
and up to greet him I get;
When my sister runs home
with a full pale of water,
my heart leaps with joy
knowing she's near and not farther.
Love at first sight,
yes -
I believe it is true;
for each time that I see them
my love starts anew."
The troll released a sudden cry
and clutched at his heart
for the young girl had spoken true
and it was him she'd outsmart.
With a groan the troll grew
legs of oak and branches too,
soaring to the sky until
the highest branch was out of view.
In the troll's place now stood a tree
with leaves that touched the clouds,
a twin to the ancient oak
that stood beside it, tall and proud.
A bridge appeared over the river
in the silence that fell,
inviting the young girl to pass over
the current's roaring swell.
The girl took one look at the bridge
before turning to leave,
"The sun will soon set," she said,
"I must be home before eve'."
Without another word she took off,
taking a left and then a right -
quickening her pace towards home
where she'd again find love at first sight.
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