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Groundhog Phil

The Unnecessary Line Challenge

By Gregory PaytonPublished 9 months ago • 1 min read
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ground Phil was notorious of his will

to predict whether Winter, would stand still

or continue on for six weeks until

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but there has been rumors of his retire

some folks have even called him a liar

others by folklore, the groundhog they admire

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It's not that Phil hasn't been wrong before

His predictions have consistently been incorrect according to lore

So why this year retirement talk for Phil to score

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the Summer tempertures are sweltering

You cannot let the warm temperature fool you

It bounces back and forth the mercury turns blue

It is unpredictable when its due

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However, this year he might have it right

Forecast predicts snow in sight

Can Phil keep his job, seems that it's tight

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Gregory Payton

I am retired Air Force. I like to write poetry, and about the economy, and about current events.I have lost a lot in my life and I also write about processing grief.

I hope you find my work interesting.

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    Written by Gregory Payton