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What a commute

By M DannenfelserPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Stuck in traffic, I started to doze

As the cars crept along in slow rows

But then what a surprise

As I rubbed my tired eyes

A parade of llamas in sombreros!

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About the Creator

M Dannenfelser

Married Midwesterner who loves reading, writing, and cats.

Part-time daydreamer, full-time nerd.

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  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    The lines are whimsical and surprising, painting a humorous picture of llamas in sombreros marching through traffic.💗💗💗

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