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God, spare me

"I'm in tears"

By Gloria PenelopePublished 22 days ago 1 min read
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God, spare me
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I am seeing stuff.

Either good or awful.

Is it because I'm sick in bed?

I'm in the dark.

Sometimes I feel quite cold.

Sometimes I feel lost.

in an undisclosed location.

Fire blazing at a distance.

People are talking.

Kids are playing.

A wonderful place,

It looks like home.

But I am sad.

I'm in tears.

But you cannot see them.

My heart cries.

But my soul tries to be at peace.

With what I don't know.

My flesh appears to be migrating away from me.

Pains throughout my body persist.

When will this end?

Is death approaching me?

God, spare me.

I still have the best plans on Earth.

Familysad poetryheartbreakFree Verse
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Gloria Penelope

Every creative piece is just me telling a story. Enjoy my creative writing!

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  • Helen Alarcon16 days ago

    I ask the universe to spare me. Sending you love 💜

  • Yeah that is the hard part of life. Being patience is the way we can escape it. My blessings!

  • Very touching. Are you OK?

  • The raw honesty in your words paints a vivid picture of the inner turmoil many of us face but often struggle to articulate. Your ability to convey such deep emotions with clarity and poignancy is truly remarkable. Thank you for sharing this powerful piece. It serves as a reminder that in our moments of darkness, we are not alone, and there is a shared human experience that connects us all. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Best regards, Dr. Jay

  • This was so heartbreaking. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Belle22 days ago

    Horrifying and beautifully written ❤️

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