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Give Up

Dont Give In

By Jae QilinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

give up, give in

see al the demons wandering

and other humans wondering

your spirits they are plundering

their minds they are fumbling

gods thunder starts rumbling

why you are you

so different and hated

you have a hunger gone unsated

among your enemies

having all the amenities

make the certain type of peace

where they can have a piece

no lie you know you don't need the whole pie

just try not to cry

looking around you

your demons surrounding you

you came from the ground anew

so it'll be easy to pound a few

its easy to let your demons in

if you do they'll take more from you

and you'll forget what to do

afraid to try something new

pushing you down

its you yourself that gives into the frown

you have to stand tall and look around

see others are struggling like you

what bothers them is juggling what they do

its all up to you to try something new

to allow yourself that change

they're all deranged

pretty soon you will be too

let them win and lose control

they want you to snowball onto a roll

stand tall be ready for the fight

you daunt from your blue toll

something just doesn't feel right

I know you wanna quit living

feeling like something is missing

while you're content in your sin

the holy father wants you free

he'll contend for your laughter

God will free you from bother

as long as its him your after

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Jae Qilin

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