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Girl Scout Burn

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Girl Scout Burn
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We would tread carefully on the bridge of our future

Making sure it was stable

As a young Girl Scout

I would love to sing the Friendship Song:

“Make new friends, but keep the old.

One is silver; the other is gold.

A circle is round; it has no end.

That’s how long I will be your friend.”

I remember it when I was a fresh daisy who was used to being fed sunshine and rain

But now I see the sun, it’s dark spots pervading my soul

The deepest red you can find

So boiling and so reckless

Not even the freshest spring can overcome it.

You played me like a fool

And dumped me to the curb

You and I had a Girl Scout connection

I thought you knew that too without words

That no matter what, we’d stay true

But you gave me a burn

A certified Girl Scout burn

heartbreak
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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos.

I am Bexley is published by Resurgence Novels here.

The Half Paper Moon is available on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

My novella Carnivorous is to be published by Eukalypto soon! Coming soon

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock4 months ago

    I'm so sorry. I never knew how to hold on.

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    This was a sad one, but authentic and well -written Melissa! 👍☹️

  • This broke my heart so much. I think most of us have experienced this. We would have thought we had such a deep connection with someone, only for them to prove us wrong. Sending you lots of love and hugs Merly! 🥺❤️

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    its sad to have a friendship betrayal

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